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Okay, Nicky. Ryan says that the image coloring looks great, but somewhere some of the line got crossed and now the picture looks less "dynamic" or whatever, and since he is LJ illiterate, here ya go

This image is the curve of her body marked in red. He is right, the way it's colored now makes her torso look weird and static. 



And here's where the cloak should be, see where you have chain mail and such....it should really be the fabric of the cloak

I had picture of where it should be colored but my computer is being dumb.  Everything that is behind the sleve fabric and the arm an is chain mail colored should be cloak colored.