May. 16th, 2007

darkelf105: (writer)

Hey guys, if you're bored, could you read this for me. I'm really frustrated and am stuck with this novel'[s opening. It's only about three pages, and I just need some general crits and more importantly, if the book started like this, would you keep going? Is it interesting? Is Isabelle interesting enough to follow? How's the world. It's only three pages so alot about the setting will be answered in due time, I just need to know if the setting is interesting.  THANKS!



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