(no subject)

[darkelf105]

Stuck on the snow spirit short story. I do however, have a main character and she has given me quite a few bits of dialog. My favorites thus far being

"I am not scared of something that is just begging for murder by snow blower."

"Hahahaha, take that! It's sunny out."

"I guess if you were a snow spirit, reincarnation would probably be what you believed in right? What with the whole water cycle and all. No snow angel heaven were celestial hosts of frosties sing carols, just never-ending reabsorbing into the atmosphere. Damn, now I've depressed myself."

Comments

[rayechu.livejournal.com]

Neat. Where did you get stuck? Also, I reread your story for class and wrote some stuff down for you. I don't know if they'll be helpful but at least you'll get some comments from me.

[darkelf105.livejournal.com]

A beginning as usual:) I am not sure what I want the tone to be....I want to make the story about loss and letting go, but I don't want to run the risk of sounding like you know who with her crazy sunflowers and angst and all...It will take awhile, it just needs to cook in my brain for some more time. I did start the first few paragraphs for the "Grave Talkers" story. When I have them cleaned up, I shall post them :).

[rayechu.livejournal.com]

Yay! Will that be tonightish or tomorrowish? If you tell me ahead of time I will stay up. Also I tried re-reading O.Henry and there is a lot more "girls suck" then I remembered. ::sigh:: So I got bored with it and started Coraline. I really liked it, but then my eyes started getting droopy and I got online for a LJ fix.

[darkelf105.livejournal.com]

I would like....tonight, but if you don't see anything by two, it's because I have given up:). I did read Tsubasa 6 and 7. Saving 8 and 9 for after I write my papers.

[rayechu.livejournal.com]

Yay! I will have to flip through them so we can talk about the cool stuff Clamp does.